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Living in the world which competition going increasingly fierce,we all expect no problems in our routine life.However,this is exactly what someone once said,"happiness is not absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them."It's subtly reveals the profound message that we should never fail to confronted with the difficulties and challenges There are seveal compelling reasons to evidence my viewpoint.Initially,it's not geniune happiness that we have not problems,which were let us dapressed and aimless.Additionally,we able to obtain happiness and contend through solving the problems.A good case in this point is that we study maths.We should continuously work out the questions,which make great progress. As a matter of fact,it is important for us to develop our ability to deal with problems and be happy.First and foremast,we ought to broken our horizons and enhance our knowledge,which have ability to deal with problems.What's more,we also can gain happiness by dealing with it.
