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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4831
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;全文结构较为严谨;能够使用一些不错的从句。

用户练习作文:

Living in the world which competition going increasingly fierce,we all expect no problems in our routine life.However,this is exactly what someone once said,"happiness is not absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them."It's subtly reveals the profound message that we should never fail to confronted with the difficulties and challenges. There are several compelling reasons to evidence my viewpoint.Initially,it's not genuine happiness that we have not problems,which were let us depressed and aimless.Additionally,we able to obtain happiness and contend through solving the problems.A good case in this point is that we study maths.We should continuously work out the questions,which make great progress. As a matter of fact,it is important for us to develop our ability to deal with problems and be happy.First and foremast,we ought to broken our horizons and enhance our knowledge,which have ability to deal with problems.What's more,we also can gain happiness by dealing with it.

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