2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the rapid development of technology ,people more and more rely on computer.The usage of computer have two sides.On the one hand ,it makes the people's life become convenient and abundunt,on the other hand ,much more people addicted to website,therefore ,consume a large number of time and lead to many unversivery fail to study. As for as I'm concerned,only proper use computer technology ,we can have a splendid future.Because website have a lot of information and papers,it is necessary for us to learn study well.However ,if you abandon yourself to playing computer games or do some useless things,it is equal to wasge life and you will nothing.