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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；全文结构较为严谨；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。
With the competition going increasingly fierce,we all expect no problems in our routine life.However,this is exactly what someone once said,"happiness is not absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them."It's subtly reveals the profound message that we should be never afraid to confront with the difficulties and challenges. There are several compelling reasons for this issue,and I would like to explore some primary ones.Firstly,it's not genuine happiness that we are absence of problems,which were let us depressed and aimless.Additionally,we able to gain happiness and contend through solving the problems.A good case in this point is that we study maths.We should continually work out the questions and make great progress. As a matter of fact,it is important for us to develop our ability to deal with problems and be happy.First and foremast,we ought to break our horizons and accumulate our knowledge,which have ability to deal with problems.What's more,we also can gain happiness by dealing with it.
