高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past,my hometown was very beautiful. You can see many trees around it.And the fishes are playing in the river.The houses are simple and crude,and the streets are narrow,people work hard but lived of the poor.But now ,the budlings were built everywhere,and cars go out streets with big and small.With the development of industry,the nvironment is bad and bad.Trees are being cut down and the fish disappeared.The environment becomes badly by the development of industry.Governance the pollution become the first important issue now.