高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些学术词汇；文中从句数量过少；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

In the past,my hometown was very beautiful. You can see many trees around it.And the fishes are playing in the river.The houses are simple and crude,and the streets are narrow,people work hard but lived of the poor.But now ,the budlings were built everywhere,and cars go out streets with big and small.With the development of industry,the environment is bad and bad.Trees are being cut down and the fish disappeared.The environment becomes badly by the development of industry.protect the pollution become the first important issue now.