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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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IT IS NOT WISE TO DRAW A CONCLUSION IMMEDANTELY WHEN YOU HEAR SOMTHING OR YOU SEE SOMETHING. ACTUALLY, MANY PEOPLE DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT . FOR EXAMPLE, PEOPLE JUDGE OTHER PEOPLE BY THEIR CLOTHING. WHEN A PERSON WEARS LUXUOUS CLOTHES, WE WOULD MOSTLY THINK THAT HE IS A GENTLE PERSON. OTHERWISE, WE WOULD NOT BE WILLING TO GET CLOSE TO HIM. BUT IF WE DO THIS, WE MIGHT MAKE SOME MISTAKES. NOWADAYS, MANY THIEIVE WOULD PLAY A ROLE AS A RICHMAN TO BORROW YOUR MONEY OR GET CLOSE TO YOU AND STEAL YOUR MONEY.AND MANY RICHMEN WOULD WEAR SOMETHING THAT IS NOT SO EXPENSIVE, SO IF WE IGNORE THE PERSON IN RAGS THAT WE WOULD LOSE THE CHANCE TO MEET SOMEONE IS REAL GENTLE. SO WHEN YOU SEE SOMETHING OR HERA SOMETHING, DO NOT DRAW THE CONCLUSION AT ONE SECOND. YOU CAN WATCH IT FOR A WHILE.

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