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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；请注意分段。
At the moment our life is flood computer international, it is very terrible for many family.the children do not refuse computer game,they spends many times in network such as oline game,social software,watch the video....they are nearly do not talk with friend ,even if parents.the children is along for long time so somebody are increaing loss communication ability with others.Many parents are anxious because they are inability deal with computer international.themselves children are serious of playing computer.they are living in room whatever eating, take shower,and studying. arrivaled any holiday,they are do not leave room,only computer in they life.For some parents they try to methods to help child come back normal life,but it is little effect.At present social expert is repoter to help children far away computer ,return in clean world.
