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能较准确地使用学术词汇，词汇运用灵活；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As is saying goes:"It is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket."Sample as it is,it subtly reveals a throught-provoking and enlightening message that we can not focus on one aspects,ignoring another indispensable part in the issue. There are several reasons for this issue,and I would like to explore some primary ones.Firstly,we have large opportunity to meet difficult and trouble,in which case we may be defeated if we have only plan.For instance,if we investigate one financial product,we will reinforce the dangerous rate and lost money.Additionally,with the fully armed and well-prepare,we can deal with accident in a preprative way.Two-hand prepartion make us easily achieve our expectation. From my perspective,we should pay attention to the fully prepared.Only when we are strong and intelligent enough can we soar with the dream.
