拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅。
Travel Broad the Mind Most of us will get excited while we refer to travel. Nowadays, travel has become a popularity in our society.Everyone not only young people,but also the old,can join it and enjoy it.The most benefit that travel brings to us is to broaden not only our views,but also our minds. On the way of traveling,we can meet different people,view various views.No matter what kind of meet in the way,enthusiastic or indifferent,kind or evil,you will learn a lot from them. Enthusiastic people will bring you more positive emotion which makes you feel better about the world. On the contrary, indifferent people may give you a lesson that we shouldn't treat others this.What's more,beautiful views can relax both our physical and our mental.Traveling abroad,we can learn more customs about other countries. And after viewing more beautiful places, you will love the world better. All in all,travel broaden our mind greatly.