小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is ChaiRong. She is my classmate. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She is nice. We all like her. She is a model student. She’s brilliant and helpful. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, Math, English, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes constitutional. variable,She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer because she can swim in the summer holiday. Her favorite food is vegetables. she eats plenty of vegetables every day. here favorite drink is milk. she drinks two glasses of milk every day. So she is health. Look! she is having vegetables and milk now. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other. She is the best friend of mine and we are good friends forever.