文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;请注意分段。
In our society, we will meet new things,new people in our daily life.therefore, many things that we should to judge it:consider the error and right.today our topic is when we judge something,we need to consider many aspect,not just depend on what you see or hear,then get the answer right away, it's not right and not wise.sometimes, the things is so complicated and sometimes we just don't hurt someone that we may tell white lie to protect someone, so if you want to make decision,please just think more, you will get so much.
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