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As the old saying:it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. different people hold different opinion. As for me, i believe this sentence. as we know, our society is developing and our economy is booming, in other words,chance will show in everywhere.if we just put all eggs in one basket,it will take more adventure and energy, the worst thing is if we failed, it's so difficult to do it again,you will lose many times,many energy. Therefore it it worth that have B plan, sometimes, we need to consider from different aspects .in addition,we all have already seems to know the changing is so fast that something we just can't to control , something maybe that we could lack of experience ,so wise to choose and judge,we should prepare some eggs into other eggs.