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There is a universal phenomenon that a great many of students in almost all colleges and universities reserve a seat for the sake of their learning in a recent period of time, which has created fierce controversy. Opinoins toward this situation vary from person to person. Some students who have reserved a seat hold that it is not only convenient for them to study in the long run.,but also have an apparent influence on the efficiency of their learning. However, there is also an opposite view on the practice among the students. On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages others’interests .Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they cannot find a seat. On the other hand, reserving a seat violates the rule of fairness. Considering the above mentioned, I think it is high time to put special emphasis on the phenomenon and the managers should take some measures to get rid of it. Of course, all of us should improve our consciousness also necessarily. Only in this way can schools create a harmonious atmosphere for the students.
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