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There is a universal phenomenon that a great many students in university would reserve a seat for their study in the following days, which has triggered a drastic discussion in students from a variety of universities. Opinions vary from each other. A part of students who have reserved a seat give the opinion that it is convenient for them to study in the long run. They would no longer have to worry about there is not a seat when they go to a room to study. Others who hold the opposite view say that they cannot find a seat when they go to a room but find that all seats have been reserved. It is unfairness to them. There are also some students who do not care that so long as there is not noise in the dormitory. From my perspective, it is not a good phenomenon. Students should be equal, they have the chance to have a seat in the room which is available. So the managers of the university should take some measures to stop this phenomenon, and give students a harmonious atmosphere to study.
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