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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;能够使用一些不错的从句。

用户练习作文:

as the old saying:don't judge a person by their appearance. As we know,our appearance is given by our parents.no matter what looks good or awful,we both to accepting it. the matter things and we could to change is enrich our inner ,put useful knowledge into our mind, let others thought we are so perfect not depend on our apperance. and meanwhile, if we have this faith,we are so confident, we also have brave to try it and do what we want do,make a bright future. in other words,of course,judge a person by their appearance is unwise. we should objective to see what the guys is through communication ,through his/her attitude to reflect it. in conclusion,if you meet new people,please give more time to figure out and then confirm it's good or not good.

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