2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

部分学术词汇用的不错，但拼写检查还需加强；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will When it comes to strong will. the view varys from person to person about strong will.The is no denying that strong will is important gugrantee to achieve success. There are so numerous examples to clatify people with full of strong will who arrive at terrfic mission.The best example is Thomas Edison, Thomas Edison went through lots of diffcuties and frustrates in his life ,to my surprise ,he could not only give up ,but aslo confront to deal with diffcultes and frustrats.Why does he select to insist instead of giving up , i strongly believe that he has strong will to support him to towards his goals . What has been disscused above .the same to everyone students .Because if we cannot work hard .we have no chance to became people who is benefical to sociey.Hence .the strong will is a key for us to success road.