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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10392
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;作者用词生动多样,请继续努力,希望能更灵活地使用学术词汇;全文结构较为严谨。

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Every coin has two sides.Putting all eggs in one,has both pros and cons.However,from my point of view,the disadvantages of putting all eggs in one basket far oughweigh its advantages.Thus,it’s never too careful to always have plan B when we deal with something important. Nobody can know what is going to happen in the future.Over the years,it’s salted for people who are interested in financing to how to assign their money on financial products,for stock market is unpredictable.Once bear market arrives,skilled people won’t be in the face of a totally desperate situation,losing all the money you have.And thus you can go on your normal life,not taking risk in pressure that gives.Our life just like investment,and that’s why we should think all aspects possible and make out an extra plan in view of undesirable results. Based on the above reasons,as a result,it’s unwiseable to put all eggs,in only one basket.Therefore,we should think twice and prepare another way to ourselves.

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