句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇基础挺好,能灵活使用部分学术词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉;请注意分段。
Dialects is a reflection of the diversity of a nation's language,which existed for hunderds of thousands years.needlessly to say,dialects have its own character,it enriches a nation's culture,etc.However,the fact is dialects are always limited,you may only use it in the specific region that the people there could understand.which means,you'd better communicate with others in Chinese Mardarin,thus people can easily get your speech through.for instance,when i came into my unversity,i seldom talk to others in Chinese Mardarin,for sure,the litseners got confused,and some of my friends told me that use dialects to talk to those from omnipresence didn't show your respect to others.with time,i realised sth that for us,we are civilians who are well-educated and live in a morden society,use Chinese Mardarin can help you leave a good impression on others