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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10551
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇基础挺好,能灵活使用部分学术词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Dialects is a reflection of the diversity of a nation's language,which existed for hunderds of thousands years.needlessly to say,dialects have its own character,it enriches a nation's culture,etc.However,the fact is dialects are always limited,you may only use it in the specific region that the people there could understand.which means,you'd better communicate with others in Chinese Mardarin,thus people can easily get your speech through.for instance,when i came into my unversity,i seldom talk to others in Chinese Mardarin,for sure,the litseners got confused,and some of my friends told me that use dialects to talk to those from omnipresence didn't show your respect to others.with time,i realised sth that for us,we are civilians who are well-educated and live in a morden society,use Chinese Mardarin can help you leave a good impression on others

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