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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4832
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Happiness is the ability to deal with the problems In the contemporary era, a lot of people among us hold the thought that the whole day is perfect and happy because of no problems. Of course it is right to most of us,however, as the old saying goes " happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.",we shouldn be ambitious and positive to our future and life in order to better face and overcome obstacles in the future. In my opinion, as a college student, we are so energetic and courageous that we can create our own future. Without such determination, we couldn't get a high achievement in our field. Full of time and power, we can make our best to study our professional course related to our vocation , take part in interested community, join volunteer work as much as we can , and take active part in the party.What's the most important is to do much exercise to maintain our health, after all, the physical health is the basis of success. Thus ,we can flourish our ability to deal with the problems and be happy. In a word, being pleasant and peaceful to handle the problems we in faced with ,and doing enough part time job to achieve experience, we can be happy every day.

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