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Happiness is the ability to deal with the problems In the contemporary era, a lot of people among us hold the thought that the whole day is perfect and happy because of no problems. Of course it is right to most of us,however, as the old saying goes " happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.",we shouldn be ambitious and positive to our future and life in order to better face and overcome obstacles in the future. In my opinion, as a college student, we are so energetic and courageous that we can create our own future. Without such determination, we couldn't get a high achievement in our field. Full of time and power, we can make our best to study our professional course related to our vocation , take part in interested community, join volunteer work as much as we can , and take active part in the party.What's the most important is to do many exercise to maintain our health, after all, the physical health is the basis of success. Thus ,we can develop our ability to deal with the problems and be happy. In a word, being pleasant and peaceful to handle the problems which we will be in faced with ,and doing enough part time job , we can be happy every day.