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2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:24浏览次数:3568
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题目 Creating a Green Campus
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1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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作者词汇基本功很好,在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

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Ladies and gentlemen: Good morning! Today, my speech is “I am the part of the Green Olympics”. The Olympic Games will be held in our country in two years’ time. “Green Olympics” is one of the Three Themes of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. The Beijing government had made a great effort in order to protect the environment, build more “Green project”, keep the ecological balance, push the recycling economy, and protects the water resource. For example ,the government will be building new hotels ,an immense stadium ,and a new Olympic-standard swimming pool ,and more building will be built outside the capital and will be called ‘Olympic City’ .My home is there ,so I am looking forward to the Olympic. As a Chinese, as a Beijing high school student, we should play an active role in the actions aimed at the realization of Green Olympics. So we should start it from ourselves, our family, our friends and other people around us. Though our country is very beautiful and modern now, it has any problem .I always see cars producing smog on the street. And in the bathrooms, I see students leaving the water tap on after using them. Not only the young people, but also the elderly ones throw things everywhere without thinking, it''s wrong, even in a beautiful park. These things are taking place every day, even in modern cities like Beijing. So, let''s begin to act! First of all, start with the things around you. Don''t throw rubbish onto the road. Don''t talk loudly when you are outdoors. Turn off the water tap after using it. Go to school by bike or by bus instead of by private car. Save your pocket money and contribute to environmental protection organizations. After washing the clothes, we can use it to flash the toilet, and we can stop somebody from demolishing environment. For me, I always pick up rubbish and throw it into a trashcan. I collect waste paper or bottles for recycling. I plant more trees and flowers, and so on. We should start from every little thing around us to truly realize the “Green Olympic”. We''re grateful, because the emblem of the Beijing 2009 Olympic Games is a precious treasure dedicated to the Olympic Movement by the people of China. Express the spirit of Olympic, publicize the theme of "Green Olympic", and let Beijing really reaches the "Green Olympic" in 2008. This is the responsibility of anyone who loves peace. And it is also the responsibility of our Beijing high school students!

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