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2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:24浏览次数:3563
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题目 Creating a Green Campus
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1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……
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With the development of science constraction, our daily life is becoming more and more convenient. But everything has both its good and bad sides, pollution has become a hot topic while the science’s building up. So the word “green” has been paid much attention to us.So do our campus. Creating a green campus is very important to build up a wonderful atmosphere. ”Green campus ” does not only means green environment, but also means a positive atmosphere of study, good personal qualities and refer to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind. What’s more, what I want to stress is that it sets goals toward the future of the world. To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken. First, learning is the most important thing, which can strength our personal qualities. Second, we should take care of our daily actions about manners and pick up waste papers here and there as we can do. Third , when you make mistakes or someone help you, you should say “sorry” or “thank you” to people with your sweet smile… Green campus make us live in a soft and warm environment. So we ought to do our best to build green campus.

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