2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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The increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life Nowadays,we use the mobile phone more and more in our life with the economic development. We rely on the mobile phone to get touch with our families, friends and workmates. But on the other hand, we use the mobile phone to chat with our friends oe the way to school or work. It's dangerous to use the it when we are crossing the street. Some people even use the walk sticks in order to see when they are crossing the street looking at their cell phone. I think overuse the mobile phone would bring us some trouble.What's more,it might be bad to our health. Using the mobile phone has two sides like a coin.We have to use it properly and thenwe will get benbfits from using it.