2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

In the first, the Chinese knot is discovered by the craftsmen.With the several hundreds years' improvement, it has become a perfect and colorful art and technology.In ancient time, people remember the things by using the Chinese knot.But we use it in order to decorate our rooms. The meaning of the 'knot' in Chinese is love marriage and reunion.The Chinese knot is often used as a gift to exchange or get fortune.This handicraft has been passed down by one generation to another.Now it has get popular in China and all regions of the world.