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We can ever listen that when we use our ability to help others deal with problems and we can feel happy. so,how can we develop our ability to deal with problems and be happy?And there care some advice to give.Fist of all,we should learn about what we do well in.For example,if you are good at computer,you can help others matain it,but you ought not to recieve persons money.And now,you can remain good feelings the whole day.Scondly,weshould learn some skils that we can help ourselves.It is not sure that we may also face with obstacle one day.Lastly and indispensablely,accumilated in experience is indispensable.We can take part in hiking、swimming and so on. when it comes to me,in my daily life,i will learn more and more skils that can help other and myself.
