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全文结构较为严谨；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. do you live a meaningful life?although everyone's expected life is different,but,we can from the proverb induce that meaning life must spend it for something that will outlast it. there are many superiors people worth our to imitate,for instance,maozedong,he was born in farm family,and he was graduated from teacher shool,though he without superb backgroud,but he has a decision in his mind,so in the last he made a great achievements to our nation.a meaningful life is like this,not satisfiy our basic need kill the time. from my perpective,only put our energy,time.money in to something baneficial to mankind can we get a meaning life.
