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文中句子错误偏多了；文中衔接词丰富；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。
The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it do you live a meaningful life?although everyone's expection's life is different,the common point is that we can infer from the proverb know that a meaning life must spend it for something that will outlast it. there are many superiors people worth our to imitate,for instance,maozedong,he was born in farm family,and he was graduated from teacher shool,though he without superb background,merely he has a decision in his mind,so in the last he made great achievements to our nation.a meaningful life is like this,not satisfy our basic need and kill the time.we need spend time efficient. from my perspective,only put our energy,time,money in to something beneficial to mankind can we get a meaning live
