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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式灵活多变，但文中的句子错误偏多；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。
The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it do you live a meaningful life?although everyone's expected life is different,the common point is that we can infer from the proverb congnize that a weathy life have to spend it for something that will outlast it. there are many great people worth us to imitate,for instance,MaoZeDong,he was born in farm family,and he was graduated from teacher shool,though he without superior background,merely he has a decision in his mind,so in the last he made great achievements to our nation.the value of life is like this,not satisfy our foundamental need and kill the time. from my perspective,only put our energy,time,money in to something beneficial to mankind can we get a value live
