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nowadays,there are innumerable people jump to conclusion promptly as soon as they heard or saw something which is regard to be incredible unwise.for one thing,what you have seen and heard may not be the really truth,consequently,it is extremly crucial for us to get it straight. in the first place,jumping to conclusion without thinking over and over again might give rise to some severe issue,since it may result in making the crect and effective choice at an emergency,accordingly,you will adopt the incorect measure which will contribute to a seriouse consequence. so ,seeing isn't believing,then i draw an conclusion that no matter and whenever we confront something,there are several steps we should chew it over ,one,what it really was,two why did it happen,three,what 's the result will it cause,if we give our mind some time to think it over instead of jump to conclusion at once,we will figure out the truth and make the efficient choice.to sum up ,it's wise to think it over.
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