2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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　On the overuse of mobile phone As is shown in the picture,we can see that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.This action let me deep in thought. Nowadays,more and more people use mobile phone all around the world,people who are using mobile phone is increasing,and you can also see mobile phone everywhere. As far as I am concerned,overusing of mobile phone can lead to some bad consequence.Firstly,if you stare at the mobile phone during long time,your eyes will be tired and have some problems in the future.Secondly,teenagers who often use mobile phone to play games,read stories and watch the films so that they have no ideas to study,it is bad effect on their study.The last one,most of the people look at their cell phones when they cross the street,I think it is the origin of accidents,it is so dangerous.