2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown where lied in the shouth of China is the third island in China.It is beautiful and we can visit some national sceneries. Suppose a foreign friend of mys is going to visit my hometown,I will take him to see the sea.we can enjoy a good time in the beach.Maybe we can play baseball in the beach or have a barbecue.