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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
When it comes to information, i agrue that most people think about internet, mobile phone and computer. Library, book and teacher are not first occured to people's mind. why this phenomenon happen? There goes a saying that " A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention." I believe that is the answer. As we all know, we can easily gain information with booming internet. However, there are also some fault ideas and it often confuse us. We can't just get it without our thought. If we copy it with a poverty attention, there is every chance that we will lost what we are looking for. From what we have discussed above, we can safety draw a conclusion that it's time for us to change. How about we look over the book and ask for teacher to capture our information? Of course, we are supposed to get help from internet, but we must distinct it. Only in this way, can we avoid being distracted by irrelevant.
