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There is a famous saying goes"the time is flying",the mean is that we are obliged to care about our lives.The time flies more faster,our lives waste more faster.We should do something that contribute to what we can embrace a satisfying lifelong.Thus,the followings are my suggestions. Firstly,we ought to exercise.It is important for us to have a healthy body,and also is the head thing for us.The reason is that we are eager to do what we want to do,we are bound to have a good body,health is anything.Secondly,we can alter our diet.There is an old saying goes"food is regarded as god for people".In other words,we cannot live if not food.Obviously,it plays a vital role in our lives.Consequently,we should have a reasonable food diet.Last but not least,the last point is goal.We can do our best to rescue something that we like.When we gain some achievements,we will feel vary happy. In conclusion,the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.In a words,if we are eager to have a pleasure lifelong,we can search for something is beneficial for us.
