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spend money properly From my prospective,it's essential for us not to waste our money for we are still students.And we all consider that money is no easy to earn.We usually shopping online looking for the cheaper things we need.As a matter of fact,it dose saves us a bunch of money and makes life convienient.But we can't neglect the negative impaction.We started to obssessed with those cheaper things and spend much more time discover them everyday.So either careful with our money or use them like new money isn't advocated.We should use our money in a proper way. When it comes to my life experience.I find many friends of mine are those who involved in sales,coupons or group-bye deals.And their choose their stuff by judging the price.Thy even don't care the quiality or appearce.As a result,they bought penty of useless things.But they still spent much money.And other people who always buy expensive goods.But when they paid for them,they regret instantly becase thay have spent all the money thay got so that they can't make a living. Above all,no matter one spend money too careful or have no future plan for their money is bad.Sometimes we can't be mean with our money but also we are not allowed to be an old money.In a word,the best way for us to spend our money is keep our mind awake.
