2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿，我一条腿，你我一起，走南闯北

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；可以适当增加副词的使用。

I am writing in response to your advertisement in China Daily of June 8 for the position of the English teacher.Your advertisement dramatically interests me because my college major is English.Besides,to be an English teacher is my biggest dream since I was a child. I graduated from English Department of Beijing University.In my college life,I experience a lot of challenge come from many aspects.I had been the chief of Student Union for two years.I won the English Speaking Competision held by our university. I wish I would get this opportunity for interviewed.My phone number is 010- 7877787.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to meeting at you.