2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次较为清晰；作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了。

As is described in the picture,a flower grow up in a greenhouse ,never experience wind and strom,when leave out of greenhouse,it can't stand any rain and wind,it gets more and more weakness.What is conveyed in the picture is most meaningful and thought-provoking. With the development of society,while children's ability that encouter frustration and trouble not good.Many factors contributed to this phenomenon.Firstly,nowadays,most family have one child,so the patents and grandparents put all their love into the child,and prepare everything for them,so the children have no need to do anything by thier hand,gradually ,they lack of ability to do anything.Second,the Internet get more convinient,children can search everything online,they doesn't think and considerate. In my piont of view,it is formal that patents take good care of theri children,but this should control in a range.parents should ensure their children have enough practical knowledge and ability to deal with kinds of problems in daily life.