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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
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文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,more and more people weigh the appearance heavier during social activities.They choose their attitude and language tune by other people's clothes and ornaments.Usually,they speak politely to those who wearing expensive clothes,and with less care to those who look like too plain which maybe stand their less money or low social position. However,judging people by their appearance cann't be more wrong.Firstly,more and more celebraties and rich men like to keep low profile.Secondly,treating pepple differently just by the appearance make themselves' appearances harsh and stupid which makes wise people go away from them. Anyway,taking all kinds of people the sameway make our life easier and also help us obtain more kindness from others.

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