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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13038
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题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

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200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用学术词汇,文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

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On the court, there is a gripping football match in which footballer is going to sore a goal but fret because he regards his rival too strong to defeat. Similarly, the goalkeeper also underestimates his capability to catch the football. It is obvious that both men are unsure of themselves. In fact, the competitor is not usually as mighty as we think, and our ability might be not always so weak as we regard, like the picture presenting. However, in the dynamic world, we hardly dare to assert ourselves as a result from the lack of a sense of confidence. Hence, in front of adversities, young people intend to give up their goal. A prime example blowing in my mind is that my close friend, as a undergraduate, who longs for further study in a prestigious university, is afraid that other candidates are so excellent as well as outstanding that she will fail in competition and lose the opportunity to be a postgraduate. Accordingly, she selects inferior one, although she is all-round and excellent person. The result demonstrates how she misses the entrance of leading school. It appears to be great significant to boost your confidence when you encounter obstacles. Through thorough investigation and adequate preparation, you can definitely estimate your capability and boost your confidence. Just as an exciting advertisement “nothing is impossible, just do it”

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