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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3135
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写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

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The flower seems to grow robustly by the shelter of glass which prevents it from storm and lightning. However, pretty soon it become feebleness when moved outside word catching storm. Obviously, the flower keeping in a greenhouse can hardly withstand the test of harsh life. Two pictures vividly mirror the issue of child’s growth. There are remarkable resemblance between the sweet flower and kids who are over managed by helicopter parents. Those kids are prone to lack independence, due to parents spoiling them. For example, the parent meets whatever child demand, protecting him from all sorts of obstacles, on the ground that parents barely grasp the seriousness of independence. To be frank, it is dispensable to allow child to suffer several setbacks and encourage he to resolve the problem by himself rather than doing all for kids. The lessons drew from the mistake cultivate his ability and broaden his horizon which is beneficial for him to accommodate to the reality when he comes of age. On the contrary, kids would feel strongly that they are incompatible with the society after entering the job. The kids would remain feeble, provided that parents are indulgent to their children. The critical steps that would change such a situation are to encourage children to perform social practice as possible as them can, and allow them to independently cope with curve ball that life throw to him. Phrase biologist Darvin “survival of the fittest”.

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