2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些学术词汇；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；可以适当增加副词的使用。

I am writing in response to your advertisement in China Daily of June 8 for the position of the English teacher.Your advertisement dramatically interests me because my college major is English.Besides,to be an English teacher is my biggest dream since I was a child. I graduated from English Department of Beijing University.In my college life,I experience a lot of challenges.I had been the chief of Student Union for two years.I won the English Speaking Competision held by our university. I wish you would give me an opportunity to be interviewed.My phone number is 010- 7877787.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to meeting you.