2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活，但请注意单词拼写的检查。

As is shown above,on the warming room stands a beautiful flower happily growing,yet it is destroyed in the wind and rain when removed outside the room.Simple as the picture is,the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean. The picture does reveal that over care is not only harmful but also damaging.It is not uncommon that most parents take care of every aspect of their children's life,yet few of them realized the sinificance of being independent.What is more,school and educator also fails to attach due attention to the student's pratical ability,which leading their student become more weankness when facing various problem come from every corner of the society.Hardly can these students well fit into society after their graduate. In this case,the schools and parents are supposed to enhance their awareness of cultivate children's ability of indenpence and competision through some promoting trains such as part-time job,outside activity.Only in this way can our children enrich their experience,broaden their mind,strenthen their mental and get ready for the complicated society.