2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；复杂句采用很棒；作者能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但拼写方面要再接再厉。

As is shown above,on the warming room stands a beautiful flower happily growing,yet it is destroyed in the wind and rain when removed outside the room.Simple as the picture is,the meaning behind it is as deep as the ocean. The picture does reveal that over care is not only harmful but also damaging.It is not uncommon that most parents take care of every aspect of their children's life,yet few of them realized the significance of being independent.What is more,school and educator also fail to attach due attention to the student's pratical ability,which leading their student become more weak when facing various problems come from every corner of the society.Hardly can these students well fit into society after their graduate. In this case,the schools and parents are supposed to enhance their awareness of cultivate children's ability of indenpence and competision through some promoting trains such as part-time job,outside activity.Only in this way can our children enrich their experience,broaden their mind,strenthen their mental and get ready for the complicated society.