小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,she is a yong girl who has log hair,and she has two big eyes.She named LiHua,as we know she is much friendly to everyone and pleasantry very.She is kind to us and often try her best to help us while we in trouble.As a result of she is a good man that she has many friends.I think she will become a great stateswoman. OK,That's all,she is my best good friend.She is a so good girl who we love she everything.What do you think of her.