2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

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As is shown above,on the warming room stands a beautiful flower happily growing,yet it is destroyed in the wind and rain when removed outside the room.Simple as the picture is,the meaning behind it is as deep as the ocean. The picture does reveal that excessive protection is not only harmful but also damaging.It is not uncommon that most parents take care of every aspect of their children's life,yet few of them realized the significance of self-reliance.What is more,school and educator also fail to attach due attention to the student's practical ability,which leading their student become more fragile when facing various problems come from every corner of the society.Hardly can these students well fit into society after graduation. In this case,the schools and parents are supposed to enhance their awareness of cultivates children's ability of independence and competition through some trains such as part-time job,outside activity.Only in this way can our children enrich their experience,broaden their mind,strengthen their mental health and get ready for the work.