文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Currently,many students pay no attention to spell alters in English studying. I think the most important reason to lead this phenomenon is wanting high speed in successed of conception in the society to influence these children.The main details of this circumstance have two.Firstly,teachers didn't pay attention to foundation of students.Second,parents just focus on children's score. In order to change this condition,we have to enhance our conception of foundation.In my opinion,there are two methods to prove to teachers and parents.For teachers,we can improve the score of a test to enhance the teachers' ideal.As for parents,to open a conference tells parents for the importance of spelling.