2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。

As the old saying goes, "There are masters in every walk of life". Observing many successful people, we can discover that they have many common points, so we can say that success is similar. But, at the meanwhile, each of them has differences, so that we also can say that success is different. As far as you are concerned, where is the way to success? In my opinion, the way to success is persist. It is well-known that Roman was not built in a day. So, on the way to success, we need patience, whenever we obtain a small progress or we fail to achieve any one target, we should insist on it. When you want to give up, recalling why you began it at the begining. And then, tell yourself to persevere, you must persevere and you can. As a result, I did it. What do you think of the way to success?