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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8983
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

There is on doubt that everyone is yearning for good lookings.However as we can see,somebody may not have great appearancee but they are unique.As a result it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. we,who born as wonderful lives,have a greatly role to play in the world.There are two points for it as followings.On the one hand,the bad guys are not stupid to be found from their appearance.Just the saying goes,‘knowing someone'appearance don't mean to know their mind.On another hand,nowadays,the appearance can be changed by advanced medical technology. In my perspective,i agrue that it is stupid to just focus on the appearance to judge a person.Only the way to judge someone from their mind can be right to know a person.

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