小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Having a friend is helpful when you get in the trouble or sometimes want to share your feeling. But it is different to get along with good friend and bad friend. Let's talk about which difference is in both. At first, good friend will give you a hand when you feel helpless and give you a good advise when you are in dilemma. Second, they won't make bad news to another person.