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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
There is a famous saying goes well"Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them".That is to say,we are bound to pursue to have possession of happiness.Therefore,I have some suggestions to gain it for happiness.There are following. First of all,I can't approve a point any more,which is the thinking deciding anything.Why could I think that?The reason is that affirmative attitude is based on happiness as well as is the chief matter.Thus,happiness is turn on actively attitude.Secondly,our brief is one of the reason of happiness.It is very vital for us to acquire joy.We are obliged to believe anything is good all around us.We will really find it is different from our old lives.Last but not least,and the important is that act.We are not only attribute to beneficial attitude,but also pursue to it bravely.Obviously,the entire skills will contribute to us to get happiness better. In conclusion,everyone has their own mind to understand happiness.The above are my ideas about happiness.In a word,I wish everyone will find reasonable measure to live a life of happiness.
